"Keep it going"
You should add more stuff on this beat. I'm feeling it, but not quite there and in my opinion change the instrument in 01:03 to something more fit, sounds kinda cheap.
"Keep it going"
You should add more stuff on this beat. I'm feeling it, but not quite there and in my opinion change the instrument in 01:03 to something more fit, sounds kinda cheap.
ight, will do. thx
"Good job for one of your 1st real songs"
Good work, not great but, ok for one of your 1st. Keep making music and eventually you'll make better music. P.S (I liked the tune that started at 17sec.) Good job!
:D thanks! I do like that tune also! And yeah, Hopefully I'll get better!
Thanks for the review!
~HinSu~
"lol a trombone"
Good job, keep working out on your music and eventually you will sort things out such as sorting out the trombone but, I see you guys want to do something different - I understand all that. Good job! P.S. I like the trombone being played but it does not seem to workout with this kind of genre.( In my opinion)
Hah. It was less of an attempt to do something different than it was an effort to include a guest in our makeshift studio.
Really happy you liked it though. ^_^
I plan on redoing the melody with guitar and submitting it tomorrow or sometime soon. If you happen to read this response, look for it. ;D
GOOD TIMES, GOOD MUSIC
Age 33, Male
Beat Artist
College
California
Joined on 3/23/09